Eve by Mike Leverentz
Word Count: 5300 words
Critique type preference: In Person
Author Email: mk*********@***il.com
Content warnings:
- Abuse
- Death/Dying
- Disregard for personal autonomy (kidnapping / enslavement / abduction)
- Shaming
Author Notes:
Hey all – This is a stand alone story in the Universe I’m developing, but a but further down the line the my other stuff… Can you plese think about the following as you read this:
- World Building:
- Did you find it engaging; what did or did not work?
- Charater:
- Were you emotionally engaged with both main characters?
- Could you identify with both?
- Did you deel sympathy for them?
- Pacing:
- Did it drag any any place? Did you become bored, if so where?
- Structure/Narrative:
- Did you find any inconsistencies?
- Were there sections where it became too exhibitional? if so where?
- Impact:
- Did the story leave you with a feeling at the conclusion? If so, what was it?
- How well did it work? Did you want to keep reading?
Notes to organisers:
I’ll be away from June 19th to July 6th – so any time after that Thanks!
Submitted: 16 June 2026
Status: New
Last updated: 19 June 2026 at 11:41 by Mike Leverentz