Lost Souls by David Whitmarsh

Word Count: 7060 words | Critique type preference: In Person

Content warnings:

Violence (gratuitous / extreme), Xenophobia

Author Notes:

1. Did you understand what was happening with the aliens, in particular towards the end.
2. Did the last scene with the POV switch work? I’m thinking of writing more stories with this character, for which that last scene is a teaser.

Notes to organisers:

Content warnings: cruelty to aliens in the backstory.

in-person – I’ve always done discord critiques but it would be fun to do one in person – just might need to do calendar juggling to fit.

Submitted: 20 August 2024

Last updated: 10 June 2026 at 18:20

Author Email: da*************@******ts.com