Shield of the Glasslaw by Isobel Mackenzie
Word Count: 5800 words
Critique Date: 27 January 2025, In Person
Author Email: is**********@***il.com
Content warnings:
Blood
Author Notes:
Is the end and Mishai’s request believable?
I’m okay with the ‘reveal’ being predictable, but is it fun? Does it work?
What could I do to bring more of Mishai as a person/character/personality out?
Submitted: 9 September 2024
Last updated: 10 June 2026 at 23:36 by Kat Kourbeti