Shield of the Glasslaw by Isobel Mackenzie

Word Count: 5800 words | Critique type preference: In Person

Content warnings:

Blood

Author Notes:

Is the end and Mishai’s request believable?
I’m okay with the ‘reveal’ being predictable, but is it fun? Does it work?
What could I do to bring more of Mishai as a person/character/personality out?

Submitted: 9 September 2024

Last updated: 10 June 2026 at 23:36

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