Hatchling by David Whitmarsh
Word Count: 9000 words
Critique Date: 28 July 2025, Online
Author Email: da*************@******ts.com
Content warnings:
Animal cruelty or death, Child death
Author Notes:
I’m trying to up my editing game with this one to try and get something much more submission-ready. Have I succeeded?
Notes to organisers:
Content warnings: possibly child death/animal cruelty as a major element of backstory, but the ones killed were offspring of an alien protagonist.
Submitted: 25 February 2025
Last updated: 10 June 2026 at 18:31 by Kat Kourbeti