The Neuronomicon by Jackie Kay

Word Count: 4400 words | Critique type preference: In Person

Content warnings:

Disregard for personal autonomy (kidnapping / enslavement / abduction)

Author Notes:

Does the prose style and voice work for you or is it too purple?
Are the character’s motivations and choices clear? Are the character arcs clear?
Do the references to contemporary sci fi work, or do they jar you out of the worldbuilding?

Notes to organisers:

Disregard for personal autonomy (kidnapping / enslavement / abduction)

Submitted: 5 March 2025

Last updated: 10 June 2026 at 23:47

Author Email: ja************@***il.com