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All Will Be Well by Charlotte McCarroll

Word Count: 3500 words | Critique type preference: In Person

Content warnings:

Disregard for personal autonomy (kidnapping / enslavement / abduction)

Author Notes:

This story was submitted to a competition with a word limit of 3500. It has been credited with a personalised rejection that stated strong writing, interesting concept, but readers couldn’t suspend disbelief. Now it is available to submit to wider markets with a greater word count my queries are:

  1. Do you agree with the assessment that you cannot suspend disbelief? Why/why not?
  2. With option for additional word count, what would you like to see more of potentially?
  3. Did you enjoy the story?

Submitted: 10 June 2025

Last updated: 11 June 2026 at 12:44

Author Email: ch*****************@*****ok.com