When We Forget What We Didn’t Know by Stephen Oram

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I’m particularly interested in whether the pacing is good, especially the gradual reveal of what’s happening. Also, if the ending works e.g. believable, not too rushed and not ‘out of the blue’.

It was written on request for a 40th anniversary of a popular film – is that too obvious and/or is it too tacky now it’s out of context.

Submitted: 16 June 2025

Last updated: 10 June 2026 at 18:37

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