The Shroud of The Tower by Joe Kaye

Word Count: 6561 words | Critique type preference: Online

Content warnings:

Death/Dying, Suicide

Author Notes:

Does this prologue work better than the previous one (if read)? Is it less exposition?
Does the story need the prologue for the central conflict to be introduced sooner?

Notes to organisers:

I have resubmitted this and am very sorry for the hassle. I shouldn’t have submitted it previously as it wasn’t fully ready.

Submitted: 23 October 2025

Last updated: 10 June 2026 at 18:45

Author Email: jo********@******co.uk