Sweet Hawthorn by Alexander Mo
Word Count: 4730 words
Critique Date: 3 March 2026, Online
Author Email: al***@***oo.ie
Content warnings:
Cancer, Death/Dying
Author Notes:
I’d like to know what elements do and don’t t work in this story, specifically: pacing, payoff, tone and characterisation
Submitted: 4 February 2026
Last updated: 10 June 2026 at 23:42 by Kat Kourbeti