The Dusk (opening chapters) by Geraint Price

Word Count: 5100 words | Critique type preference: In Person

Content warnings:

Blood, Combat, Death/Dying

Author Notes:

These chapters are the opening of my novel, so I’d like to say as little as possible and ask for your unpremeditated first impressions, in particular any comments and suggestions about the all-important hook factor alongside any other comments and advice you’d be happy to offer.

Submitted: 26 February 2026

Last updated: 10 June 2026 at 23:16

Author Email: ge***********@*****il.com