The Eyes Among Us by Alex Forbes

Word Count: 5985 words | Critique type preference: Online

Content warnings:

Blood, Combat, Death/Dying

Author Notes:

I’m working up to submitting the manuscript to agents so trying to ensure the first 3 chapters are tight and engaging throughout. Let me know where you feel lost or start to lose interest.

Submitted: 16 March 2026

Last updated: 11 June 2026 at 13:22

Author Email: al***********@********co.uk