The Eyes Among Us by Alex Forbes
Word Count: 5985 words
Critique Date: 15 April 2026, Online
Author Email: al***********@********co.uk
Content warnings:
Blood, Combat, Death/Dying
Author Notes:
I’m working up to submitting the manuscript to agents so trying to ensure the first 3 chapters are tight and engaging throughout. Let me know where you feel lost or start to lose interest.
Submitted: 16 March 2026
Last updated: 11 June 2026 at 13:22 by Kat Kourbeti