WIP Chapter 7 Extract by Ty Ogunade
Word Count: 4222 words
Critique Date: 13 July 2026, In Person
Author Email: ty*****@***il.com
Content warnings:
Classism
Author Notes:
This is an extract from chapter 7 of the sequel to my cyberpunk novel. It is extremely unedited and in its rawest form, so I’m not looking for feedback on grammar, sentence level, or that type of stuff. I mainly want to see if the section is engaging and if the concepts make sense and can be followed. Does it make you want to know what happens next with these characters? Also, feedback on pacing is always useful, does it drag entirely or just in certain places?
Notes to organisers:
This submission is replacing the previous submission I made. To be critiqued at July 13th session
Submitted: 5 July 2026
Last updated: 14 July 2026 at 18:11 by Kat Kourbeti