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The Limbo Blade by Alex Forbes

Word Count: 5000 words | Critique type preference: In Person

Content warnings:

Blood, Death/Dying

Author Notes:

This is my first stab at the short story format so curious how it lands. Is the ending effective? Do the character motivations make sense? Thanks!

Notes to organisers:

Let me know if any other content warnings are appropriate. There are references to abuse, without it actually being depicted. Thanks!

Submitted: 17 November 2023

Last updated: 10 June 2026 at 17:39

Author Email: al***********@********co.uk