Duplicate Chapter One by James Hadzess
Word Count: 8700 words
Critique Date: 13 February 2024, Online
Author Email: ja**********@***il.com
Content warnings:
Blood, Combat, Needles, Snakes, Spiders/Insects
Author Notes:
This is a new more dynamic style using hyperbole. I also bend the meanings of words and employ extravagant vocabulary. Does this contribute to the writing or is it merely irritating? Is the writing style appropriate for the theme?
Please see content tags below – there is also a brief heterosexist joke in the piece.
Notes to organisers:
I’m targeting the young adult market with this novella.
Submitted: 29 December 2023
Last updated: 10 June 2026 at 17:48 by Kat Kourbeti