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Curse of the Goldmans – Chapter 1 by David Imiruaye

Word Count: 3317 words | Critique type preference: In Person

Content warnings:

Abuse, Death/Dying, Shaming, Slurs, Violence (gratuitous / extreme)

Author Notes:

  1. Is Joan too unlikeable?
  2. Would you keep reading past this first chapter?
  3. Any slow bits?

Submitted: 11 February 2024

Last updated: 11 June 2026 at 13:29

Author Email: ej*********@***il.com