Vessels of Broken Gods by Isabel Harry

Word Count: 7700 words | Critique type preference: In Person

Content warnings:

Classism, Death/Dying, Suicide

Author Notes:

These are the opening three chapters of my fantasy novel, covering each of my three pov characters. I would love to know:
– Does this opening grip you?
– Do you think the chapters are ordered in the correct way?
– Is the world-building clear and engaging?

Notes to organisers:

I know the word count is a little over the standard, but I wanted to include the perspectives of all my pov characters for critique. Let me know if this is a problem!

Submitted: 6 March 2024

Last updated: 10 June 2026 at 23:34

Author Email: Is***********@***il.com