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Understanding by David Whitmarsh

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Author Email: da*************@******ts.com

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Author Notes:

Does it work or is the ending too obvious?

Notes to organisers:

Away all of August
I prefer in person but OK if you need a filler for in person
I’m asking if the ending is too obvious, but if it’s tagged with CW death/dying then it will be.

Submitted: 30 June 2026

Status: New

Last updated: 30 June 2026 at 12:07 by David Whitmarsh

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